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HarryDeeGunman

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why is this garbage on the frontpage what even is newgrounds anymore its like tumblr all over again jesus fucking christ

This is why Newgrounds became garbage.

I don't think the massive amounts of NSFW artists and mediocre animators coming straight from Tumblr are doing NG any good. Tumblr is garbage and all of its users should've died with it. JewTube is garbage as well, except that behemoth will never die, sadly.

The art itself is good, but the message is what I disagree with.

ChazDude responds:

'JewTube'

Ok byeeeee.

So personal it's on your NG page for everyone to see.

Now THIS is ART. The shading, the colors, anatomy and pose make it look so menacing and manly, dude. Fucking amazing.

...Not like those anime-like Madness fan-arts.

Jesus fucking Christ that is way past cute.

An excellent example of an amazing use of colors, combined with some badass shading. Outstanding piece, man!

I feel like the shading needs to be more intense, like around the necks, or in the background (given that it is basically just a line separating two colors). The anatomy is good, but in order to make it shine you would need to work more on the that.
I'm not sure blue lining works well on Yeelon's skull and besides, it would seem like Kelzad is brighter when they both should shine the same, IF Yeelon is actually getting electrocuted.
The background seems a bit boring. It definetively would have been better if the city was there, with a magenta glow coming out of it, to set the mood a little.
Great work on the skull anatomy though, really cool! On the other hand I think the electricity on Kelzad's head is way too round and inconsistent, as opposed to the typical look for it wich is quite straight, and thinner.
I think that's all I have to say about it.
Don't get me wrong I like this piece, and hope this review can help you improve you future work!
Godspeed.

Kelzad responds:

Yuh, I love me some constructive reviews. I'll definitely take this into account, and thanks for telling!

We dig, we borrow. Because this street goes nowhere.

Harry D. Gunman @HarryDeeGunman

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